Post by Renji Abari on Mar 17, 2011 4:14:27 GMT -5
I am very wary of posting my OC. She's lived in my head and partaly written fan Fics for almost a year now and this is the first time all of her information has been pulled together and put up for ANYONE other than me to see. Please critique gently. *Waits for severe bashing*
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Name: Raito (Thunder) DOES NOT HAVE A LAST NAME AND DOESN'T REMEMBER HER REAL ONE
Age: 23 (In Gigai and looks) Real age is 100+ years
Gender: Female
Class: Vizored
Hair (Color, Length, etc...): Blood red with shock white strips. When left down it reaches past her waist.
Eyes (Color, any details?): Jade Green with specks of gold
Height: 5’1”
Weight: 197lbs (Top heavy, much to her chagrin)
General Looks (Clothing, Arrancar Markings, etc...): two hoops piercing in the top of her right ear and three in the left. Has black Kanji tattoos that make swirling designs across her torso (Once in bankai, the tattoos reveal themselves to be two dragons wrapping around her body). Wears Shinigami uniform with the 8th squad logo on the right arm of the shihaksho. The left arm is ragged and torn, her hakama slightly smaller and form fitting. Never uses her mask for fear of being discovered but. Her mask has two royal blue swirl patterns, one on each cheek with slits for her eyes, a black rose seeming to rest behind her ear.
Personality: Short temper, slight ADD, loves animals and spends time talking with them instead of other soul reapers. Hate’s cold water, gossip, and being stared at.
Family (Parents, siblings, etc...): Father’s Name was Raito
History: After her father died by a hollow, she took his name and made her way through The Soul Reaper Academy. She finally got accepted into the 9th squad. After Aizen set up the current Visored’s, she went searching for Kensei, reaching the area in the Rukongai that she last felt his presence after Kisuke Urahara and Tessai transported the current Visoreds to safety.
Within a few minutes of searching the area, her body and mind at war with one another, she collapsed and became hollofied. Without anyone to battle, she fought herself to keep control as she ran deep into the Rukongai’s woods.
She lived by herself there for almost a month until she could control herself, finally returning to the 9th division without a speck of suspicion about her disappearance (Due to the uproar caused by Urahara and the Visoreds). She transferred to 8th Division because she never really liked Tousen, who had became captain in her absence. She now holds the 6th seat but doesn’t try to move up, the fear of her being discovered and her power taken away put a heavy toll on her. The resulting stress creating the white strips in her hair.
Sample RP:
Another day, another training session. She let the cocky asshole in the 5th seat beat her again because the dark stirring in her soul had started again. ‘Raiden (lightning)’, she aptly named her hollow, had wanted to surface for the first time in ten years. The 5th seat of her squad was sexist and a pig but Raito put up with him to blend in. Raiden whispered in the back of her mind as she left the 8th to go home.
A strong grip on her wrist startled her and said Asshole was trying to pull her to him. She shivered, smelling alcohol on the larger man. “Com ere ya slutty bitch” he slurred; “I’m a fuck ya and make ya my pet. “ She pulled against his grip, fear of her hollow suddenly tearing the man apart paralyzing her as the 5th went to try and disrobe Raito. She drew Ru-Doragon and sliced off the 5th’s hand, turning to run as he grabbed her hair and slammed her head first in to a wall. She groaned in pain, seeing stars as Raiden and Ru urged her to get up and run.
She complied, letting her feet carry her to the 4th division before she realized Ru wasn’t in her hands. She let out a relived sigh when she saw the sword had been sheathed but her right arm and head began to throb. She touched her forehead, finding blood.
She cursed and stepped into the 4th division to check herself in for treatment, wincing at the pain lancing up her right arm when she moved her fingers and belatedly realizing it must have broken.
Sooner or later Raito knew she would be discovered. She feared the day but knew it might be happening soon.
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Zanpakto Info
Zanpakto Name: Ru-Doragon (Red Dragon)
Sealed State: While in its sealed state Ru-Doragon is barely short enough for Raito to carry at her waist. She usually hangs Ru-Doragon from her left hip unless she’s in a hurry, at which point she puts Ru-Doragon on her back.
Shikai State: Release command, Bathe in the blood of the fallen, Ru-Doragon! Blade transforms into a halberd (staff-like weapon with an over-sized axe head on one side and a spike jutting out from the other) carved with runes, most of which are covered by a strange ice blue ribbon, and what ever hair tie’s she’s wearing will disintegrate.
Bankai state: Gaikotsu Ru-Doragon (Skeleton Red Dragon) Ru-Doragon gives Raito red spikes jutting from each disk in her spine, a matching tail, and blood colored elbow length gloves that make her hands claw-like. The halberd triples in size, two long chains attached to the bottom making it possible for the halberd to be thrown and pulled back like a deadly missile. The blue ribbon covering runes gets burned off the more she fights, increasing her strength as well as her speed.
Hollowfication: gains ability to use cero but never shows her mask even in the most desperate situations. Full power and abilities of her mask are not known.
Zanpakto Human form: Tall medium-length black haired man with wire rim glasses and emerald green eyes. He wears a blue and black traditional Yukata, walking around barefoot. He’s very soft-spoken and entourage’s Raito to come out of her shell. He answers to Ru and has discovered he can materialize himself without alerting Raito or Raiden.
Hollow Human form: Raiden has white and blue hair, her skin ice white. Instead of trying to take over Raito’s body all the time, the two came to an agreement and eventually it turned into an awkward friendship. Raiden only wears a white hakama and a halter-top Shihaksho to show that she doesn’t want to be exactly like Raito.
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Name: Raito (Thunder) DOES NOT HAVE A LAST NAME AND DOESN'T REMEMBER HER REAL ONE
Age: 23 (In Gigai and looks) Real age is 100+ years
Gender: Female
Class: Vizored
Hair (Color, Length, etc...): Blood red with shock white strips. When left down it reaches past her waist.
Eyes (Color, any details?): Jade Green with specks of gold
Height: 5’1”
Weight: 197lbs (Top heavy, much to her chagrin)
General Looks (Clothing, Arrancar Markings, etc...): two hoops piercing in the top of her right ear and three in the left. Has black Kanji tattoos that make swirling designs across her torso (Once in bankai, the tattoos reveal themselves to be two dragons wrapping around her body). Wears Shinigami uniform with the 8th squad logo on the right arm of the shihaksho. The left arm is ragged and torn, her hakama slightly smaller and form fitting. Never uses her mask for fear of being discovered but. Her mask has two royal blue swirl patterns, one on each cheek with slits for her eyes, a black rose seeming to rest behind her ear.
Personality: Short temper, slight ADD, loves animals and spends time talking with them instead of other soul reapers. Hate’s cold water, gossip, and being stared at.
Family (Parents, siblings, etc...): Father’s Name was Raito
History: After her father died by a hollow, she took his name and made her way through The Soul Reaper Academy. She finally got accepted into the 9th squad. After Aizen set up the current Visored’s, she went searching for Kensei, reaching the area in the Rukongai that she last felt his presence after Kisuke Urahara and Tessai transported the current Visoreds to safety.
Within a few minutes of searching the area, her body and mind at war with one another, she collapsed and became hollofied. Without anyone to battle, she fought herself to keep control as she ran deep into the Rukongai’s woods.
She lived by herself there for almost a month until she could control herself, finally returning to the 9th division without a speck of suspicion about her disappearance (Due to the uproar caused by Urahara and the Visoreds). She transferred to 8th Division because she never really liked Tousen, who had became captain in her absence. She now holds the 6th seat but doesn’t try to move up, the fear of her being discovered and her power taken away put a heavy toll on her. The resulting stress creating the white strips in her hair.
Sample RP:
Another day, another training session. She let the cocky asshole in the 5th seat beat her again because the dark stirring in her soul had started again. ‘Raiden (lightning)’, she aptly named her hollow, had wanted to surface for the first time in ten years. The 5th seat of her squad was sexist and a pig but Raito put up with him to blend in. Raiden whispered in the back of her mind as she left the 8th to go home.
A strong grip on her wrist startled her and said Asshole was trying to pull her to him. She shivered, smelling alcohol on the larger man. “Com ere ya slutty bitch” he slurred; “I’m a fuck ya and make ya my pet. “ She pulled against his grip, fear of her hollow suddenly tearing the man apart paralyzing her as the 5th went to try and disrobe Raito. She drew Ru-Doragon and sliced off the 5th’s hand, turning to run as he grabbed her hair and slammed her head first in to a wall. She groaned in pain, seeing stars as Raiden and Ru urged her to get up and run.
She complied, letting her feet carry her to the 4th division before she realized Ru wasn’t in her hands. She let out a relived sigh when she saw the sword had been sheathed but her right arm and head began to throb. She touched her forehead, finding blood.
She cursed and stepped into the 4th division to check herself in for treatment, wincing at the pain lancing up her right arm when she moved her fingers and belatedly realizing it must have broken.
Sooner or later Raito knew she would be discovered. She feared the day but knew it might be happening soon.
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Zanpakto Info
Zanpakto Name: Ru-Doragon (Red Dragon)
Sealed State: While in its sealed state Ru-Doragon is barely short enough for Raito to carry at her waist. She usually hangs Ru-Doragon from her left hip unless she’s in a hurry, at which point she puts Ru-Doragon on her back.
Shikai State: Release command, Bathe in the blood of the fallen, Ru-Doragon! Blade transforms into a halberd (staff-like weapon with an over-sized axe head on one side and a spike jutting out from the other) carved with runes, most of which are covered by a strange ice blue ribbon, and what ever hair tie’s she’s wearing will disintegrate.
Bankai state: Gaikotsu Ru-Doragon (Skeleton Red Dragon) Ru-Doragon gives Raito red spikes jutting from each disk in her spine, a matching tail, and blood colored elbow length gloves that make her hands claw-like. The halberd triples in size, two long chains attached to the bottom making it possible for the halberd to be thrown and pulled back like a deadly missile. The blue ribbon covering runes gets burned off the more she fights, increasing her strength as well as her speed.
Hollowfication: gains ability to use cero but never shows her mask even in the most desperate situations. Full power and abilities of her mask are not known.
Zanpakto Human form: Tall medium-length black haired man with wire rim glasses and emerald green eyes. He wears a blue and black traditional Yukata, walking around barefoot. He’s very soft-spoken and entourage’s Raito to come out of her shell. He answers to Ru and has discovered he can materialize himself without alerting Raito or Raiden.
Hollow Human form: Raiden has white and blue hair, her skin ice white. Instead of trying to take over Raito’s body all the time, the two came to an agreement and eventually it turned into an awkward friendship. Raiden only wears a white hakama and a halter-top Shihaksho to show that she doesn’t want to be exactly like Raito.
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